Wednesday, October 14, 2009

Never Will I. -alexandria zinov.

This is a story i have started to write, tell me what you think...

INTRO.
keara was 16 and in 11th grade at barobe high school, she enjoys life great. the one thing that she is afraid of is falling in love, she never wants it to happen and wants to hide it the rest of her life. intill someone comes along and trys to open her heart, not sure what to do keara trys to push away. fights get in the way, and a bad accident in her family does not help at all, will keara learn to love or be like this forever.




A cold day it was today, the wind blowing hard and drops of water fall from the sky and on the the bench that i was sitting at. "I am going to be late to school" sighed keara. then the bus pulled up and she climbed on in a hurry.
second period.
"i hate math" wispered keara to her best friend kennedy sitting across from her." i agree, so did you hear about the new family that is joining our studio today?" "no"replied keara. " ah, i hope their are some new cute boys" " oh be qui- before she could finish her teacher mr. mitchel was at the end of her desk telling her to get back to work.
before 6th period.
"hey girl" said trever as he starts to put his arm around keara in the hall. "uhh, hey" said keara backing away from trever. " so you going to take up that offer and go to dinner with me?" " no" said keara slaming her locker shut. luckly the bell saved her and she practly ran off to class.
it was 7th period now and keara couldnt wait to go to dance, she watched the clock every second,. finally the bell rang and she met up with kennedy, and drove to dance. when they pulled up to the studio their was a new car in the parking lot. kennedy practly leaped out and ran to the door. when they walked in there was a new girl and a new boy in the room, brother and sister i guessed. when i glanced over at the new boy i froze my heart seemed to skip a beat, then i look away quickly. "keara are you ok?" said kennedy "yeah" said keara. " the new boys cute hu?" said kennedy smiling "sure" kears replied taking another glance at him. "alright class this is chris and destine, they are new members to our group now be polite" said danny our dance insrtuctor. "yes everyone replied at their own pace.
we all started to strech when chris walked up to me and said, "hi"
tell me if you like it. and if i should finish it. :) thanks!
p.s. i am a horrible speller!!!

3 comments:

  1. I really liked it, of course you should continue writing it! If you really love something, keep at it! Why didnt she want to fall in love?

    Kelsey Ross

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  2. because, love is dangerous, you never know what will happen she didnt want her heart to break.
    -alexandria zinov.

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  3. I think this is a great premise that would appeal to many teen readers. The only thing I have to say is CAPITALIZE CAPITALIZE CAPITALIZE!

    Ms. L

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