Tuesday, October 13, 2009

The City of Peace By Savid Acuna

The scene seems full of life yet not a single soul is in sight. It is peaceful and relaxing to look upon such scenery of beauty and harshness towards the once natural place it was before. The sun is low in the sky casting shadows here and there. Overhead it is cloudless, as on a beautiful spring day. Just on the horizon you can see the silhouette of mountains that have escaped the wrath of modern society. It is late in the year for some plants have started to change the colors of their leaves and are getting ready for winger. There might have been rain lately for the grass looks as though it has been soaked straight to the roots. Not many plants are shown because most of the ground is covered in concrete.

There are many kinds of structures in this place of peace. Some tall with many levels to them and some as small as plain houses. There is a large structure with stains on the roof, of age and rain. It might as well be an important place because the size is great and could house many people. There may be hundreds of structures scattered all around the city, so it seems like a great ocean of cement and bricks washing the land. If you have business or just want to go to the opposite land you can take a boat or drive. From this point you could think that there aren’t such things as problems in the world. Everything seems it is in harmony with all of its surroundings.

2 comments:

  1. That was very descriptive and it put a vivid picture in my mind.

    -Blake Brockbank

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  2. Good job Savid. It had lots of description and was way better than mine.

    -Ammon Harris

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