Wednesday, October 14, 2009

Breath Of Life By Taryn Green

Soon I found that I have no hope,
But others seem to have to much.
People don't get married, they elope.
Why don't I fit into that bunch?

I can't see why I don't fit in,
Am I being blamed for a crime?
Did I commit a sin?
I know I need some time.

Some love is what I need,
A brave prince to save my life.
Soon my heart won't bleed,
As I get the Breath Of Life.

5 comments:

  1. Wow, that's deep and pretty!

    Ellie Dow

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  2. I liked it, it was pretty!

    Taylor Tomlinson

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  3. Heavy theme and thoughtful. Keep it up.

    Ms. L

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  4. I love it, Taryn! It's so deep and interesting.

    -Rhiannon Cordova <3

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