Glass
Love is like glass
Sometimes smokey and hazy
Other times crystal clear
Many times it's an illusion
Glass will shatter,
Leaving you with many scars
A piece will come out
Can it be fixed?
Or will the rest crumble away?
This is a random poem that I'd thought I'd share. I'd love your opinions on it. By the way this poem is not written from experience.
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That's awesome! Great metaphor!
ReplyDelete-Rhiannon Cordova <3
this is a really great poem.
ReplyDeleteSierra Iams
Experience with an "e" not and "a".:) I like it!
ReplyDeletePeter Rosen
Awesome! really creative=)
ReplyDeleteMadelin Crapo
I love the comparison & the words you picked.
ReplyDeleteMelissa T. B.
So creative! I really liked how you could compare glass to love.
ReplyDelete-Alysann Flower
This poem is very deep and very true. I like how you put in that the poem wasn't written from expierence. I think some of the best poems are written out of what you see in someone else. I'm glad you posted this, its very unique and interesting. Good job!
ReplyDelete-Alex Crowell
Straight and to the point, but full of thought in between the lines. What a wonderful metaphor to use!
ReplyDeleteMs. L