Tuesday, October 13, 2009

A Sea Adventure By Allie Neff

The vast sky is as bright as midday, the sun shining from the East. The aqua colored lake is filled with canoes, anxious to embark on an adventure. In the background there is a clock tower standing tall with pride, ready to endure anything that stand in its way. The people are waiting along shore, letting their worries fly away while they sail.
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6 comments:

  1. WriterOctober 13, 2009 at 3:56 PM

    I like it Allie.
    -Jasmine Crespo

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  2. WriterOctober 13, 2009 at 4:20 PM

    That's really good, Allie. Your word choice is great!

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  3. WriterOctober 13, 2009 at 4:24 PM

    Sorry, the last comment was from me.
    -Rhiannon Cordova <3

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  4. WriterOctober 14, 2009 at 3:40 PM

    Really good, Allie
    Peter Rosen

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  5. WriterOctober 14, 2009 at 4:54 PM

    Great job Allie.
    Thanks for posting on mine.
    Steven Pappas

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  6. WriterOctober 14, 2009 at 6:23 PM

    I love it Allie! Great job! :)
    -Kyleigh Cooper

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