Tuesday, October 13, 2009
A Shadow of a City by Blake Harsh
When you first look you see a pale arc of some kind. When you double take you see that the arc is the support of a key to mass transportation. You look down from that and you are confronted with a strange sight to behold. It is a strange sort of circular triangle almost as if it is coming out of the pale blue ocean, but leaving only the reflection of a blob. There are about five circular triangles. All five of them seem to be sticking out of the pale, pale blue ocean. Inside of each circular triangle there is a yellowish glow protruding out of it. They are each bent in a different direction as if saying they are mad and want to be away from each other, and in the process a magnificent structure is created. The last circular triangle is pointing out right into, as it seems, the pale arc. As if this circular triangle is saying take me across the pale, pale arc. If the circular triangle were to cross over the arc, it would meet up with an amazing series of different colors and flashes. It is so beautiful the circular triangle would not even believe it. As the circular triangle would get off the arc onto a platform that goes the rest of the way across the pale blue ocean, it would see tall box shaped things with glowing multicolored lights flashing in every direction.
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Wonderful! I loved the excellent descriptions in your piece! I especially loved how you compared the triangles to being mad at each other. Well done Blake! :)
ReplyDelete-Marissa Earley<3
That's really good, Blake!
ReplyDeletePeter Rosen
Genius! Good job Blake!
ReplyDeleteHarry Potter...
A.K.A. Kelsey Ross
Awesome job Blake!!!! I (Like Marissa) also loved how you described that the triangles were mad at eachother. hahaha! GREAT JOB!
ReplyDeleteMaddie McMillan
Good job Blake! Those were some pretty awesome descriptions!I'm very impressed!And if you ever need help escaping angry triangles I will help!
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