Sunday, November 28, 2010
McCall Mash - Creative Writing Paragraph
She no longer had anything to fear. 85 years old; waiting to leave this place, and move on. Like a rose, she was done blooming. When she was young, death scared her. Just like it scares all youthful souls. But with age she gained a grace, that taught her to no longer fear. Life was good, she did all she felt she needed to do; and so she prepared to leave earth. Full of dignity and pride she accepted her future, and with joy she met it. And for us, she can teach a valuable lesson; to never fear.
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We have some great writers in this class, and McCall, you are one of them. Great job, especially with the life lesson.
ReplyDeleteTaylor T.
Wow, you are an amazing writer. I liked the part that you said,"Like, a rose she was done blooming." That is a very good life lesson; to never fear.
ReplyDeleteDiana Valenzuela
That was crazy it was so good! Great job McCall.
ReplyDelete-Skyler B.
I really enjoyed reading your paragraph!(: Well done!(:
ReplyDelete-Cassidy Nelson
Wow I liked your comparisons!-Very cool!
ReplyDeletethat lasto comment was posted by Conner Wilkinson
ReplyDeleteMcCall,
ReplyDeleteYou had very good comparisons, and ideas, I really enjoyed your writing.
-Ciera Bradley
Wow, I'm speechless....
ReplyDelete-Allie Neff