The girl asks the window questions but the window whispers nothing to her. She wants to know what the outside world hides from her. The innocence of childhood holds her back. The joyful innocence of wonderful childhood but why did she want to know. She should enjoy her childhood, not wish to pollute it with the stench of the world. She needed to stay clean but she didn’t want to. She went looking to the window and soon enough she saw the rest of the world.
I was tired of childhood. I went looking for the truth. I didn’t know what the truth was but now I know that I still wish I didn’t know the truth. At the age of seven I went looking, looking, and looking. I found what I had been looking for. But once I figured out that Santa wasn’t real I realized I wished I had never gone looking in the first place. That's what childhood tragedy this picture reminds me of.
-Xander Summers
I love the rich tapestry of words you painted on my soul. Nice imagery.
ReplyDeleteWill Matthews
You had great imagery and description. I like how you put a lot of thought and depth into your writing. It has a lot of meaning. Great job!
ReplyDelete-Tessa Yates
I love "I went looking for the truth" Good job!(:
ReplyDelete-Brynn Hall
Great job Xander!(: Love the word choose and depth in your writing.
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choice**
ReplyDelete-dana Soweidan
I loved how you related the picture to your own life!(: Good job!
ReplyDelete-Maddie Olsen
Good job! I really liked how it painted a picture. It was very well put. It was so meaningful and true! :)
ReplyDelete-Stephani Rodriguez
Great job!!!! i didn't know you were such a good writer!!! keep it up!!!
ReplyDelete-Briana Evertsen
This painted a amazing picture! I can definitely relate to this situation. Great job!
ReplyDelete~Misty Schumann
Great job! I felt that you really connected to this picture which made the readers connect to it along with you. It was great!
ReplyDelete~Ellie Dow :)
Good job Xander! This is amazing description and connecting to the picture. Great work.
ReplyDeleteTaylor T.
That was a great job of setting the mood!! Nice work!
ReplyDelete-Sami Hutchins
Good job :) I liked how intriguing and cool it was!
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