Tuesday, November 23, 2010

Ciera Bradley

The young girl in the windowsill, Francis, is all alone. She has a doll but she has no happiness, she has power working against her, it hurts her. She needs love and warmth.
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10 comments:

  1. WriterNovember 23, 2010 at 2:20 PM

    Interesting discription. I think I know which photo you are talking about.
    -Jasmine Crespo

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  2. WriterNovember 23, 2010 at 4:33 PM

    comment by Yitian Zhang

    i love it! so much description in such little sentences!

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  3. WriterNovember 23, 2010 at 6:03 PM

    Great paragraph! Very deep and great word choice!(:

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  4. WriterNovember 24, 2010 at 10:56 AM

    I liked it, it was sad but it got the point across that stuff isnt all that you need in life. Good job Bradley!

    Comment By: Jillian Brinton

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  5. WriterNovember 24, 2010 at 1:15 PM

    I loved the description. You created a big mood in such little amount of words.
    -Carleigh Penrod

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  6. WriterNovember 24, 2010 at 4:34 PM

    Great job!! it really paints a picture for me!!!(even though i really want to see this picture) keep it up!
    -Briana Evertsen

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  7. WriterNovember 25, 2010 at 7:11 PM

    It's so to the point but at the same time so discriptive. I love it!
    <3 Alysann Flower

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  8. WriterNovember 26, 2010 at 10:34 AM

    That's so true! I love it babe. :) It shows that we need to love and care for everyone. Great job i loved it!
    -*Stephani Rodriguez*

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  9. WriterNovember 28, 2010 at 8:08 PM

    I loved your description! It was very sad but it created a specific mood for the reader with very little words. Good job!
    ~Sami Walker P4~

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  10. WriterNovember 28, 2010 at 9:01 PM

    So powerful! You are such a great writer!(:
    -Cassidy Nelson

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