Friday, December 11, 2009

Strike My Past, Another Poem by Marisa B.

Strike the sky
Strike it down
Steal the life away

Fade forever
Out of fact
Into myth
Towards legend

Past remembrance
Past hope of return
Towards happy days
Strike down my Past
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Tell me what you think of this one please!
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3 comments:

  1. WriterDecember 11, 2009 at 9:47 PM

    That is awesome Marisa! I love all of your poems! You should share them with me *nods*.

    Taylor T.

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  2. WriterDecember 16, 2009 at 4:38 PM

    Awesome x infinity. I read it. SEE!
    -Jasmine Crespo

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  3. WriterDecember 27, 2009 at 11:47 AM

    I love it!
    Your word choice is perfect and the way the words flow and twist inside of the reader is fantastic!
    Great work!

    Melissa T. Brummett

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