Falling, Another Poem by Marisa Bell

Falling

There's something I do quiet a lot

I sit in a tree

When the Summer is hot

Uncomfortable, yes

Beautiful, yes

Amazing, perhaps

Then I'll spread my arms

And attempt to fly,

But as always,

I fall from the sky

This one needs work and even I've accepted that. Feel free to comment, I don't care if all you say is negative, but I'd like something positive.
What do you think?
I was thinking about writing a book for NaNoWriMo and I was thinking for the title something like Don't Kill Me... Yet. Is that something that you would read or be interested in?

(sorry about the font size, the computer isn't cooperating)